SciFi and Fantasy Art: Cheesecake for Val

Hmmm... yes.... very nice.... ::eats the cheesecake::

Oh, and the rest of it... Also very goot! I would say... don't be afraid to shade the eyes! They may be white, but they don't light up... well, maybe they do, but then there would be no shadow around them. So... yeah... I really like the face and the arms. In fact, the anatomy is pretty nice, overall ... .. .. . I think the transition between the human elements and the tail could be a bit better with some more even shading. The tail seems.... whiter.... than the rest. Nice pose though... very nice... I'm so bad with poses... so static... but enough about me! Your work is great! heh hee 8D

Kai 'nowhere' Blin replies: "Yeah, I'll definetely do a more shaded version of this one. I'm still not really into inking. but now that I got real white ink, I can risk more real blacks. I'll tackle this next weekend."

I can't eat cheesecake, goes straight to my tail. You should redraw him with more shading and a little teeny-tiny bit less muscle. And some more hair would be nice. Not to mention more cheesecake. Who could ever be satisfied with such a small slice?

Kai 'nowhere' Blin replies: "Hehe. Well this cheesecake was for Val, not for you I agree on more shading, but that's just why I did him as muscular. Lots of stuff to shade now. "

This is kewl,i likes the way his tail folds behind him. The muscles are done well. You should go and see my "snake dude" picture, tis like this, only in demon form!

Kai 'nowhere' Blin replies: "Heh, just had a look at it. Nice one.Perhps you'll see this picture in some shading variants if FARP starts to accept tutorials again."

So back again (just had to call my hard disc back from vacation... long story).

Anyway, I just wanted to add, that the face could need some work (there is no eye-lid for example)

Aaaaand one question:
Where is the rest of the cheescake. I know this slice is for Val... but then I just take the rest of it^^ *loooooves cheesecake*

Kai 'nowhere' Blin replies: "I'm not sure if nagas have eyelids.. No, actually I did some, but obviously not well enough. I so suck at doing faces.Oh, I guess there's still some cheesecake left. You can have it. I had to eat all the chesecakes of the previous tries, so I can't stand cheesecake anymore. "

Somehow I have the impression I know this picture (ah, yes, I've seen it this weekend, right *g*).
Yes, the version with more shading is better, but I like this one, too). You did a great job on the muscles (*isn't able to manage to draw muscles in her pics*) and I like the hands (*also isn't able to manage to draw hands in her pics*). Oh, and I like the tail (note to self: I should draw more half human- half something soon).
Rest of the comment later.

Kai 'nowhere' Blin replies: "Well, this was a present to Valerie Valusek, a great artist and the person who got me into drawing instead of just giving up. I spent so many hours on getting it look ok because I needed it to feel worthy. I'm still not sure if it is, but it's the best I could do."